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You Might Not Need That Comma

My Comp II teacher had a rule: for every three comma errors, you lose a letter grade. I hated that class. I made at least 7 comma errors on every paper for 8 or 9 weeks. I just couldn’t get it. I’m pretty sure I got a C, but I’ve blocked it out, so I can’t be sure. What I can be sure of is the careful attention I pay to commas in my writing now.

That class was a ridiculously painful—and annoying—experience, but one that I desperately needed if I was going to be successful in the writing I hoped to do. I think many students, even at the graduate level, could benefit from something similar. The two most common comma errors I see are:

  • Fear of the run-on: Some people seem to have been so traumatized by their primary school teacher’s overemphasis on run-on sentences that they start getting uncomfortable when a sentence gets long. After a certain number of words or lines commas will start to randomly appear.
  • A mark for a pause: Writing isn’t exactly like speaking, but we think like we talk and write as we think. Some people have been taught that, as a rule-of-thumb, if you’d pause in speech you should add a comma. But commas don’t mark pauses; they are structural markers.

These errors are easy to deal with.

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Unique

We’ve all become accustomed to statements like, “Her style is very unique,” or, “this book has a somewhat unique perspective…” The usage just rubs me the wrong way. The word unique is meant to mean “one of a kind”; how could a thing be very one of a kind?

The word falls into a category of absolutes, similar to “complete”, “equal”, and “perfect”, and isn’t meant to be modified. Each of these words closes out all variablity by definition. There are no degrees of perfect, no approximation in equal, and no real comparison between complete and “nearly complete”. And something that is merely uncommon is not of the same type as something that is actually unique. There are important qualitative differences between these absolutes and their approximations.
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